tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2267155696150004363.post5623203443650631234..comments2023-10-14T09:20:04.495-04:00Comments on Steven Cordero's Blog: Teaser TuesdaySteven Corderohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05891598188156163954noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2267155696150004363.post-46428137507964879952009-04-08T12:35:00.000-04:002009-04-08T12:35:00.000-04:00You hooked me as soon as I got to the dialogue - i...You hooked me as soon as I got to the dialogue - it really snaps and pulls me right into the story. But the first three paragraphs feel like set up, and I'm not sure I needed them.Gretchenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09327185025020171674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2267155696150004363.post-69818079680779752842009-04-07T20:37:00.000-04:002009-04-07T20:37:00.000-04:00Oh man, I'm hooked, Steve. Like the others, I have...Oh man, I'm hooked, Steve. Like the others, I have a bad feeling about this and I wonder if the brief debate about whether to sit in the front or the back of the bus will take on extra meaning. Very nicely done!Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00538062058261008040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2267155696150004363.post-58506185187272490002009-04-07T13:27:00.000-04:002009-04-07T13:27:00.000-04:00Good stuff! Love the lively discourse between the ...Good stuff! Love the lively discourse between the girls. LOL on the dirty words. Ha! :)Karen Duvallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01839711547501582977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2267155696150004363.post-8464255171059773272009-04-07T13:21:00.000-04:002009-04-07T13:21:00.000-04:00You had me at "women ruled the world" Ha-ha. Nic...You had me at "women ruled the world" Ha-ha. Nice read - the sharing "bad words" in other languages made me smile - definitely fits kids that age. Good work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2267155696150004363.post-74194287226508167162009-04-07T11:33:00.000-04:002009-04-07T11:33:00.000-04:00This made me laugh. The first words I learned in R...This made me laugh. The first words I learned in Russian were fairly similar. And I was in college. :Dsunnahttp://amybai.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2267155696150004363.post-56218507656308124262009-04-07T11:13:00.000-04:002009-04-07T11:13:00.000-04:00lol at the kids and the dirty words. So true. Like...lol at the kids and the dirty words. So true. <BR/><BR/>Like Sue, I'm guessing something bad is about to happen....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2267155696150004363.post-81271649674252623512009-04-07T10:40:00.000-04:002009-04-07T10:40:00.000-04:00Oh, God...I think I know what's about to happen.I ...Oh, God...I think I know what's about to happen.<BR/><BR/>I love that conversation, dirty words in other languages, been there, done it, seen it, bought the t-shirt.sue laybournhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14549268075528924978noreply@blogger.com